Dabbeling in Plein Air

I have been attending a Plein Air (outdoor) painting group through SDAI that meets on the third Saturday of the month.  It’s a new experience for me to paint outdoors, and sometimes with an audience.  I noticed people were gathering behind me and even taking pictures.  I felt like I was part of Balboa Park.  I choose to paint the lily pond by the botanical gardens.  I’ll post a picture here for you to see.  What are your thoughts on the piece?

12"x12" Oil on Canvas

12"x12" Oil on Canvas